Narrative & Genre:
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In terms of narrative, we see a sequence happen
from start to finish, it is in continuity order. Women gets on the metro, sits
next to guy, falls asleep. No use of sequence variation.
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The plot is very simple and easy to understand,
and that tied with the man’s expression when he decides to get back on the
metro may suggests that this use of plot could be described a cute.
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The linear chronology of the short film also
helps the impact of the film come along, this may be one of the reasons why the
film won a TIVO award.
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As it is a short film, it is harder for theory’s
to become evident. For example toderovs narrative theory of equilibrium,
disruption repay, equilibrium is harder to apply, however in Dream Girl, the equilibrium
would be him happily sitting on the metro, the disruption would be her falling
asleep, then the struggle to repair the disruption would be him getting back on
the metro, and final equilibrium would be when she is asleep on his shoulder
again. This works well as it does mean you can apply the theory to this short.
Representation:
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Key genres in the film are hard to apply
directly however if I had to narrow it down to one it would be a romance, just because
this issue occurring in the sequence relates to love, and caring for others
therefore romance is the only suitable genre to categories this film into.
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The expected audience will have shaped the representation
of the film, as a boy and a girl, one seeking comfort, one feeling
uncomfortable so naturally the outcome will be a romance, also a clue in the
double meaning title of the short “Dream girl” referring to the love of one’s
life and because she is asleep.
Audience:
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This short film was located on virgin media
shorts.com so the expected audience would be people who take an interest in
short film screening and production, because the website is well in the top
percentage for short film’s and would be the place of the main screening.
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The audience would be pleased with the film, especially
the female audience as it arises a situation of which the male character is
left to leave a decision and of course it is a bit cheesy love story, however
this works for the female audience, him making the conscious decision to leave
her asleep with no one’s shoulder would make females no angry but perhaps think
“typical men” however him choosing to return and miss his stop to give her a
shoulder to sleep on would redress the balance.
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As far as I could find, the film has been
screened on virgin media shorts and YouTube but nowhere else. However the film
has won a TIVO award which is an independent awards scheme created by virgin rewarding
unique and inspiring films for all things from camera work to plot.
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Alice Sea bright, the director, producer and
filmmaker all in one, perhaps a contributing factor as to why she won the TIVO
award. In terms of information about her, we know very little about her, and
she has no information on IMBD or on Virgin media shorts itself, even her film
on the website says “genre: other”.
Media Language:
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The screen grab
represents two emotions, as previously mentioned the two emotions felt, she is
seeking comfort, and he is feeling uncomfortable. In the grab we can see a lot,
high key lighting, mid angle shot to show the main features of both characters.
And (not clear from the image) diegetic sound throughout. We can denote the
feeling of coldness and tiredness as everyone is wearing coats and she is
snuggled up on his should seeking comfort and rest, perhaps at first this is
not what he is looking for due to his expression in the screen grab, however in
the end we know he does enjoy her company.
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In terms of editing there are really very few things
to comment on, the only editing clear is a couple of jumps from inside to
outside of the train. In terms of camera movement we can see a hand held
camera, which could connote busyness and a cramped situation on a train, and
represents realism, even as a spectator we would feel more involved because of
the hand held camera rather than a stable tripod camera.
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Possible connotation of the situation would lead
to the audience assuming it is late, and cold, and people just want to get
home, as well as the polite minding your own business and personal space rule
of public behaviour which she seems to break. Loneliness and opportunism is represented
as well during the film because he goes far out of his way to make sure she is
comfy again showing the audience that he cares and perhaps a relationship could
occur from this.

Good effort on your short film research Charlie, rather descriptive in parts you may wish to go back and apply the theory to a greater extent.
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